show me!
she cried,
running after him
on her short,
chubby legs
in her pink frock
come n get it,
he laughed,
holding up his fist
his eyes,
half-mischievous,
half-mocking
she stumbled
over the sands
excitedly
as fast
as she could
chasing him in circles
till she tripped
over an
unfinished castle
and fell flat,
on the wet mud
he turned
she sat up
and howled
five-year old baby
he, suddenly quiet
and bewildered
sat beside her
and held out
his empty palm.
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This one's among my favourites here..
Reminds me of a beach holiday eleven years ago..:)
oh fab stuff! absolutely loved it.
brilliantly done.
something you observed?
tuib, ashwin: thangoo.
pankaj: nah. dunno how it came to me. actually meant to be siblings playing.. elder brother, lil sis.
but also could mean a wild-goose chase, when you think you're on to something, but in the end, it was 'such a rush to get nothing at all' (coldplay)
bleh.
really nice one .... and the second meaning actually was what i was thinking :)... wild goose chase...
memories...
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