Sunday, May 25, 2008

Drunken laughter,
you and your friends
just chillin,
havin fun,
your nightly routine
after the
long tiring day.

Ash falls.
Burn your
orange-glow souls
in a circle
on that couch
every eye reflects
hollow silhouettes.

5 comments:

Kiran said...

too much for my level :P

Naveen said...

wow, mind blowing!

Chari said...

Shadow-Poetry. Peachy.

Harish Govind said...

orange glow souls and hollow silhouettes...
holds the rest of the lines wonderfully.

ashes2087 said...

why hollow?