Sunday, May 09, 2010

tense

they met
over and over again
desperately trying
to feel
the way they used to

they knew
it wasn't working
who goes first?

8 comments:

Partha said...

you have a knack of capturing the essence in the least number of words! thx! :)

Tangled up in blue... said...

You published your own book of poems! Wow! That is wonderful, wonderful news! And it looks beautiful, the cover design is fantastic..:) I'm definitely ordering it!!!

Kiran said...

Pro.

Kiran said...

Pro.

ramya sriram said...

thanks everyone.

tangled: thanks, and it's so good to see you back!

rgc said...

Congrats on the book!

Love the way you have conveyed what a lot of people go through, in such simple words.

Glad to see Tangled up in Blue back!! :)

Sasi-pository said...

Beautiful - and so true right at this point of time!

Punkster said...

Beautiful!