Sunday, June 21, 2009

I thought
I'd sit here
and prove to you
that I'm invincible

now
before I break
I'd rather
you get away.

4 comments:

Ashwin said...

i like this one.

Ricercar said...

i guess there is no joy in the triumph of having proved a point, if it leaves you broken :)

ramya sriram said...

yes..the point went unproven.

Bland Spice said...

Invincible is not -- sounding right. Maybe unbreakable.

And then,

Now
Before I do (to avoid repeating the word)

Thinking...

I'll mail you when I get the laptop - can't access my emails.