General compartment!
stand,or sit down
on newspaper
chinese scale,
for just ten rupees
pirated dvds,raw mangoes
chutney dribbles
from the vendor's idli basket
everytime he passes by
everyone stares
at everyone else,
an indian habit
nobody seems to mind
the heat,the sweat
the dirt,the tamil songs
playin on his cellphone
as he nods vigorously,
and sings along
two small kids,
their black, beady,
curious eyes
taking in every detail
not looking away,holding
a bold steadfast gaze
in the corner,
a young lady eats
a packed lunch,
curd rice and pickle,
and throws the rest
out of the window,
where paddy fields
and small villages
endlessly rumble past.
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vellore to chennai? :)
Graphic :)
do you have a photo blog?
Graphic :)
do you have a photo blog?
@naveen:
yup,actually was written chennai to vellore but same oly :P
@me:
no photo blog :)
you really have the gift of painitng with words - i loved the "black, beady,
curious eyes"
as always you finished it with great finesse.
BlandSpice
what better description of a train journey! you may or may not stare, but you certainly take in a lot of the world
ah!! train rides in 2nd class compartments are such 1st class journeys in pure opulence of experience
bravo painter with words:-)
wonderful!
and you finally titled a poem!! :)
got to do with the introduction of middle side berth?
UR compartment train journeys...nothing that u wrote have I not experienced and felt...the only way to get back memories is to read them again...in this form...
verrnaice.....
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