tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post3169229305371490540..comments2023-12-24T16:31:26.798+05:30Comments on Inklings: From a tea leaf to a humanRamyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11463894001297755306noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-74203692526967166782008-12-20T17:19:00.000+05:302008-12-20T17:19:00.000+05:30too good... Mind blasting... Seriously..too good... Mind blasting... <BR/>Seriously..Kiranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13227700685952955432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-42850464158158228542007-10-17T11:22:00.000+05:302007-10-17T11:22:00.000+05:30....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-87527425998136739892007-10-17T11:19:00.000+05:302007-10-17T11:19:00.000+05:30I have tweaked a couple of lines.. Most sincere ap...I have tweaked a couple of lines.. Most sincere apologies if I've disturbed the sentiment.... Your blog is quite good - R <BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>I have given<BR/>All I had <BR/>and all that was expected of me.<BR/><BR/>My life is complete.<BR/><BR/>I have been boiled <BR/>till all my colour drained out<BR/>leaving me pallid and weak.<BR/>I have been squeezed mercilessly<BR/>to yield the last drop of my flavour.<BR/>I have lived not for myself<BR/>but for you,<BR/>and now I'm reduced to <BR/>nothing but manure<BR/>So that I may be soon<BR/>A tea-leaf again <BR/>And give myself to you.<BR/><BR/>My friend...<BR/>our lives can be the same<BR/>Should you find whose days you flavor.Rohithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11988988352101946305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-11199076332283799302007-07-13T17:40:00.000+05:302007-07-13T17:40:00.000+05:30"definately not one of the better ones"?? I think ..."definately not one of the better ones"?? <BR/><BR/>I think its great.gskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17570581978333323562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-53572742217793685982007-06-14T01:33:00.000+05:302007-06-14T01:33:00.000+05:30long timeno verselong time<BR/>no verseBland Spicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18118881822892452579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-69679102694129386212007-06-10T03:09:00.000+05:302007-06-10T03:09:00.000+05:30to be honest, i don't have an eye for poetry; only...to be honest, i don't have an eye for poetry; only prose. But I like yours. They are relevant, pithy and very evocative. Something like a haiku. Try to write more regularly. Our generation does not have a lot of art that captures our own experiences - instead we try to extrapolate from what comes from the Western world. It's nice to read your lines and be able to relate it to an experience lost or alive; but there nevertheless.Bland Spicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18118881822892452579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-35503567611027874962007-06-03T01:35:00.000+05:302007-06-03T01:35:00.000+05:30oh sheesh!this is actually a tea leaf speaking!i j...oh sheesh!<BR/>this is actually a tea leaf speaking!<BR/><BR/>i just read the poem and that's exactly what struck me.Bland Spicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18118881822892452579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-41103267298571095542007-06-02T18:03:00.000+05:302007-06-02T18:03:00.000+05:30Nice.But don't mind it, this might be the autobiog...Nice.<BR/><BR/>But don't mind it, this might be the autobiography of a tea-leaf!Bland Spicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18118881822892452579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7287405.post-81168607623891595992007-05-23T00:48:00.000+05:302007-05-23T00:48:00.000+05:30Poignant...!!First time here.. hopefully there sha...Poignant...!!<BR/><BR/>First time here.. hopefully there shall be more.. keep writing...Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01948071155588091775noreply@blogger.com